check out my first poem ever!
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check out my first poem ever!
by paris-girl Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:05 am
My friend of mine
I`m so lucky to have you around
You make my world so magical
Whatever I did
Whatever I said
Or made you mad,
You still my friend…whom I love
Your existence beside me something I need
And that what u always did
Through the hard times, and the good ones
And when the dark clouds of sadness gather round in my sky
Your shining smile will let it disappear
So no fear…anymore
That you are here
And never far …for me
And I can see,
That sparkle in your eyes
Every time I share with you my feelings
Our jocks, our songs, our secrets,
Our fun time that we`re spending it together
Are painting my life with the colors of the rainbow
And I know,
That only for you
I can scream loud
To tell the whole world
That I have a real friend
And that we shall be always together
Forever,
Till the end …true friends.
I`m so lucky to have you around
You make my world so magical
Whatever I did
Whatever I said
Or made you mad,
You still my friend…whom I love
Your existence beside me something I need
And that what u always did
Through the hard times, and the good ones
And when the dark clouds of sadness gather round in my sky
Your shining smile will let it disappear
So no fear…anymore
That you are here
And never far …for me
And I can see,
That sparkle in your eyes
Every time I share with you my feelings
Our jocks, our songs, our secrets,
Our fun time that we`re spending it together
Are painting my life with the colors of the rainbow
And I know,
That only for you
I can scream loud
To tell the whole world
That I have a real friend
And that we shall be always together
Forever,
Till the end …true friends.
paris-girl- Number of posts : 22
Age : 30
Location : dear little town called hbb
Registration date : 2011-07-10
Re: check out my first poem ever!
by Guest Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:33 pm
Sorry paris-girl! I have to quote it in this way so as to be able to read it. Thank you for this poem.
My friend of mine
I`m so lucky to have you around
You make my world so magical
Whatever I did
Whatever I said
Or made you mad,
You still my friend…whom I love
Your existence beside me something I need
And that what u always did
Through the hard times, and the good ones
And when the dark clouds of sadness gather round in my sky
Your shining smile will let it disappear
So no fear…anymore
That you are here
And never far …for me
And I can see,
That sparkle in your eyes
Every time I share with you my feelings
Our jocks, our songs, our secrets,
Our fun time that we`re spending it together
Are painting my life with the colors of the rainbow
And I know,
That only for you
I can scream loud
To tell the whole world
That I have a real friend
And that we shall be always together
Forever,
Till the end …true friends.
Guest- Guest
Re: check out my first poem ever!
by Im_A_psychic Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:55 pm
That's just lovely 
Are you for real; this is your first time ? If so, then WOW, you're quite the talented poet 
, keep up the creativity 
Are you for real; this is your first time ? If so, then WOW, you're quite the talented poet , keep up the creativity 
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Age : 41
Location : Algeria
Registration date : 2010-12-05
Re: check out my first poem ever!
by paris-girl Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:53 pm
thank you guys ! actually i m not sure if i should call it poem ,i d rather prefer 2 call it lyrics to be sung ,cuz it is not well-rimed , and besides 
i can really sing
i can really sing
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Re: check out my first poem ever!
by Im_A_psychic Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:08 pm
That would be quite a show you'd put on if you sing ! I can't wait to hear your soothing voice lol ! Any chance, even 1 in a million, that I get to hear your voice ! You teased me, so you had it coming! Asking you to sing, that is lol
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Re: check out my first poem ever!
by paris-girl Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:18 pm
actually my friends say i can sing like an angel ! 
what a humble girl i am !
what a humble girl i am !
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Re: check out my first poem ever!
by Im_A_psychic Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:21 pm
So humble, bless you lol !! So, is that a yes ? I get to hear your voice lol ? I never heard an angel-like voice 
xx I'd be delighted to hear yours, Paris Hilton. lol
xx I'd be delighted to hear yours, Paris Hilton. lol
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Re: check out my first poem ever!
by paris-girl Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:22 pm
it wud b intoxicated !u sure u can handle it ?lol
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Re: check out my first poem ever!
by paris-girl Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:24 pm
y dont u join me in the chatbox?
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Re: check out my first poem ever!
by Im_A_psychic Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:24 pm
Bring it on, then lol. I've handled crazy, weird stuff ! How can't I handle an angelic voice ? lol
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Re: check out my first poem ever!
by Londonhbb Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:43 pm
• It's a very nice poem Paris-girl. 4 sure u'll write better nd better.
• Frankly, I'm delighted that u have this poetic competence (nd u r from hbb
)
• Frankly, I'm delighted that u have this poetic competence (nd u r from hbb
)
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Re: check out my first poem ever!
by sandrilla Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:31 pm
nice Paris girl! love it though I dont believe in friendship, not anymore !!! and yeh you r from bb?? khiar ennas
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